Dream On – NaPo 2025 Day Seventeen

Today I was challenged to write a poem themed around friendship, with imagery or other ideas taken from two paintings (my choice from many). One by Leonora Carrington, and another by Remedios Varo, two surrealistic artists and friends. A surrealistically inspired, friendly poem?

The irony of this day is this prompt juxtaposed with the definition of surrealism: “the principles, ideals, or practice of producing fantastic or incongruous imagery or effects in art, literature (poetry), film, or theater by means of unnatural or irrational juxtapositions and combinations.” (Webster, on line) Where does one draw the line?

“One good friendship will outlive forty average loves.”


Faces

On purpose.
Told no one. Told everyone and nobody.
Formless as seen on tv ritual
ceremoniously entwined
with green crabapple branches.
Cuts. Touch. Mix blood brothers.
That smell. You! What? Stink-love.

Feel that? Smell. Yell. Scream.
Lie. Beatings from bullies.
Shinny-up. Run. Escape. Drown. Cross.
Crimeless criminality.

Friends first. Not. But.
Family was a lie.
Roy Rogers was naked.
All naked. Sing. Pray. Sting like a bee.

Share hair. Cardboard shoe soles
over shew holes and altar boys.
Smoke sticks. Tangents. Guilt.

Together every day. Share loot.
Flat nose. Black eye. Blood everywhere.
Swing. Fall. Break things.
Climb. Cry. Evil father.
Saintly mother. Naked sister.

Uncle Joe. G. I. what da ya know?
Cold is not coal, or pea.
Melds wrapped in love and shame.
Masturbating demons defiled hosts.
Do it. Now dare to do-do, pee higher.
Lie to be loved. Play all day.

Ugly beauty deep forever.
Melting madness of happiness.
Wanting what color of love?
Damn.
Help.
Hurry.
Hide.
It’ll never die.

Then it died.
Then you died.
Then I cried.

Back.
Then.
When.
Me.
We.


Look both ways or every way at the same time
because art is in what part of a dream when nothing is real and there is no god?
Imagine. Mind the gaps and slaps in genital naps.
If it makes sense, it cannot be art.

5 thoughts on “Dream On – NaPo 2025 Day Seventeen

  1. Bill, this piece is wild and raw in the best way.

    It hits me like a splintered memory, messy and moving—I’d say it feels to me like friendship refracted through a shattered stained-glass window.

    Much love,

    David

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  2. Bill, I was about to leave a serious comment but…

    The mention of masturbating demons and defilement drew the attention of the Bird Men of Burnley. They arrived halfway through my reading of Dream On, coughing up cloud-mist and dragging their talon-scuffed lawn chairs. One had a tracksuit made entirely of old curtains, another wore a crown of crisp packets. They listened in silence, which was rare. Then the oldest one, Keith, I think, scratched his belly with a burnt-out spark plug and said:

    “It’s like… if a bedtime story got lost on the way to the pub, stopped to pick daisies, and ended up whispering itself to the moon.”

    They all nodded, opened cans with their beaks, and toasted the line “watching my dreams dissolve into the grey of dawn.”

    “Aye,” said Nigel, stubbing out a roll-up on a featherless knee, “He’s cracked it. That’s what happens when the dream don’t end, just fades into admin and unpaid invoices.”

    Then they flew off in slow spirals, dropping haiku scribbled on Greggs napkins. You’ve got their vote.

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