Today I was to write a poem that incorporates song lyrics – ideally, incorporating them as opposing phrases or refrains (I didn’t). Though not specifically prompted, I felt like the poem should be a “loose” villanelle which, like the example, doesn’t rhyme (much).
Just to Feel Good for a While
To forget about life for a while
We hear the songs and drink the wine
and you got us feeling alright
Everyday life is one more trial
We feel abused by the tyranny of time
To forget about life for a while
We sit and we cry when we sing
Sadness and resistance break down
And you get us to feeling alright
We laugh until it hurts in a good way
Looking forward to this now all week
To forget about reality for a while
It seemed so much like just yesterday
When love, I thought, was here to stay
And your song and the grog got us to feeling alright
With midnight closing in
As we feel it and see it all in the air tonight
To forget, for now, about life’s pain for a while
And your song got us feeling alright
Look both ways on the hardest of days to find a break in the clouds.
Mind the gaps and learn the words of all the songs and poems you love.
Immediate thoughts of this:
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Oh, hell yes, Peter. We are friends forever! 🙂
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