For the final day of April and to close out the 2025 version of how I do National Poetry Month, I was to pen a poem that describes various times in my life when I have heard the same band or music.
Congrats to all participants. This may have been my best NaPoWriMo year because the prompts seemed to be in my poetry writing lane. One a day for 30 days, on prompt.
Thanks to Maureen for another fantastic April.
Composed
Melody and lyrics done separately
twenty years before my birth
in a language I did not speak
never intended for my ears
for the Threepenny I’ve never been
Thirteen-ish me,
a maligned Catholic school kid
discovering hormones;
Friday night dances (nun-chaperoned),
and un-churchly music we loved;
songs like The Battle of New Orleans,
Mack the Knife, Personality, Venus,
Lonely Boy, and a hundred more.
The year another paper boy
and fellow music lover, Don M. said
was when the music died.
But it had not. Not yet. Not ever.
My music may die with me. But not today.
Not until Bobby Darin — did Mack the Knife
find me with five up-key modulations
bring marvelous darkness to musical light
to make us feel a special song
in a special time. Then and since.
Wonderful covers, pre and post, but
back then I didn’t know about
someone and something I liked so much,
music that would change with me,
year after year, never the same old song.
Look both ways
“Now on the sidewalk…lies a body just oozing life, eek!”
Mind the gaps cuz,
“someone’s sneakin’ ‘round the corner—could that someone be Mack the Knife?”
Interested in more? Check THIS out—especially the video of Bobby Darin’s version, if you’re not familiar with the song.
EXTRA – EXTRA – EXTRA —- A friend and classmate of mine just let me know about this new, hot, Broadway production honoring Bobbie Daren.
Some interesting versions here Bill. Well done for surviving the whole month with such great poems.
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Thank you, Peter, for all your support and wonderful comments.
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Cool💕
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Mack the Knife is one of my favourite things ever! But I’m not enamoured of Bobby Darin’s version. If one is going to get smart-arse and chuck in extra words and all that, I think Robbie Williams does it best – but I prefer it sung fairly straight, as in Louis Armstrong’s 1964 version. Nevertheless loved your poem. (And after all, your Mack the Knife experience is yours, not mine.)
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Thank you, Rosemary. I agree that each version holds something special. 🙂
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You might like this thing of mine, about my first (brief) marriage and how it began:
First
Hawthorn Town Hall, Saturday night.
The best band, playing hot.
The tune was Mack the Knife.
He turned, a suave stranger.
“May I have this dance?”
That wicked smile!
I stepped into his arms
and we began.
… Oh, the shark has
pretty teeth, dear….
© Rosemary Nissen-Wade 2002
From Secret Leopard: New and selected poems 1974-2005.
Also in Chronicle 26 Aug 2005.
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Damn! The verse breaks didn’t print. They come after lines 3, 5 and 8.
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