Day two of the NaPoWriMo dot net prompts has me writing a platonic love poem. In other words, a poem that is not about a romantic partner, but some other kind of love. In my case, the plutonic love of a friend.
My poem was to be written directly to the object of my affections and should describe at least three memories.
Hello, Jimmy!
I don’t remember
where or when we first met,
nor when we were not friends,
Jimmy (later Jim),
never James to me;
although, I left first
for Basic Training,
before you went later
to Navy Boot Camp.
We grew up through times
of learning to swim together,
our first diving board jumps,
walking the mile and stopping
on the way home
to pick and eat wild berries
on the spot, while “dying” of thirst.
To our family’s first televisions
and Roy Rogers, and more
black and white pretend life.
You from a large and growing
family, me essentially
an only child,
fishing in pristine
Pocono streams or
in the smelly Susquehanna,
where we also swam
and somehow survived.
We shared the instinct to
climb every wall or cliff,
getting stuck because up
was easier than down.
We shinnied up and jumped off
almost everything,
often landing wounded.
We stumbled into rocky,
hormone laden, teenage
years when you had sisters
who I noticed more and liked.
We envied each other’s worlds.
Our last visit was, what we felt,
a final embrace;
only this time—
you were the first to leave
and left me forever behind.
Look both ways to discover the many forms of love,
what it is and what it is not.
Mind the dark, silent gaps in time
when the love of a friend outlives many longer romances.
A special kind of love indeed that, sadly, not everyone gets to enjoy.
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Thank you, Peter.
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Beautiful, Bill 🌸
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Thank you, Sunra.
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You’re welcome.
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The movement in your lines narrative makes this appear even more so a well woven story. What an epic!
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Thank you.
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Oh, I felt this one, Bill. Beautifully done. Some friendships stay with us forever, even after they are gone.
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Thanks, Dale. Cuffed you likes it. 🙂
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Cuffed, eh? Back of the head? 😉
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🙂
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