Today I was to write a sonnet. While allowed space regarding traditional sonnets, I was to keep with a general theme of “love.” I did not shoot for iambic pentameter, but I did manage ten syllables per line, except for the final two, which are nine and eleven, thus averaging ten. I made no attempt to rhyme.
I don’t think you understood love like me.
When I told Mom that you were a good man
Walking home after making arrangements
She balked. I understood and we agreed.
You had always been a difficult man.
With a world view no wider than the path
Of a tear rolling down my cheek or hers.
Coalminer tough and Irishman drunk.
Your mother died when you were only eight.
You were raised by a strict Scotsman father.
About him and you, you never told me.
He was your only father role model.
Now I wonder about me as a father,
And my wife as my children’s mother.
Look both ways in love and life.
Nobody is perfect and forgiveness is good.
But forgetting is optional.

Honesty goes a long way.
Nicely done, Bill.
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Thank you Dale.
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Very moving and insightful Bill. Awesome job. 👏🏼
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Thank you, Gypsie.
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Most welcome Bill! 😊
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It’s a Sorta Sonnet Bill. I know, I’ve written a couple! Well done.
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Thanks, Peter. 🙂
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