For mid-September, our fantastic Mistress of Friday Fictioneering fantasy, Rochelle, poked us with the picture of Pincushion Hakea flowers provided through the good graces of Trish Nankeville.
The lovely photo inspired my memory, and I considered a quote by Henry David Thoreau that Rochelle has posted on her blog in the past, it’s not what you look at that matters, it’s what you see. Some say it was written as, “The question is not what you look at, but what you see.” (From the essay, “Walking.”) Whatever—close enough. What you see is a good theme.
I’m fascinated by the work of people who see around us the things I miss: the artists and photographers who’s work I often borrow to enrich my world. Through their art, I get to see what they see: a lovely natural world.
Click on Trish’s photo of the red pincushion flowers to be transplanted into Rochelle’s blog where you can learn how to set your roots into the Wednesday, Friday Fictioneers writer community.

Genre: Autobiographical Fiction
Title: Thoreau’s Pincushion Hakea
Word Count: 100
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We walked the path near the lake. Jay was a talented amateur photographer who did all his own film processing.
He said, “It’s like hunting. Look there. What do you see?”
I replied, “Weeds and stickers.”
We knelt and he spritzed water on the weeds.
“Look closer.”
I looked. “Wow. I didn’t even see the flowers much less that spider’s web. Now it all glistens.”
He said, “Everything is a subject or a scene. I use other things, lighting, angles, and point of view to enhance it. I do more in the lab. It’s the beauty of nature artfully staged.”
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Look both ways. What you see matters.
Mind the gaps for the hidden fruits of nature’s beauty.

Don’t spoil the illusion for the Instagram generation! Nicely done Bill
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Thank you, Iain. They have no clue. 🙂
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I like the idea we need artifice to see what’s actually there
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Thanks, Neil.
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Beautiful! The world around us is full of wonders… if we but take the time to see them. 🙂 ❤
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It’s so true, we see if we look and do not if we don’t.
It’s what I love when I photograph nature. Your story
speaks to the eye of the insightful viewer.
Isadora 😎
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Thank you, Isadora.
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Dear Bill,
“The beauty of nature artfully staged.” I love that! I’m also impressed that you knew the flower’s name. Great dialogue. I could see and hear these two. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle,
I’m glad you enjoyed it. I managed to find the flower on google. It is distinct.
All these photographers. 🙂
Peace,
Bill
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Amazing what you see when you go out with the intent to take pictures.
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That’s true, Kathrine. And these days everyone has a camera. 🙂 Thanks for the comment.
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Lovely revelation Bill. Nicely done!
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Thank you, Peter. 🙂
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I understand Jay so well.
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Shutterbugs of an f-stop. 🙂 He once won a large contest with a photo of my middle son.
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How lovely! I never entered anything.
As you said to Kathrine, everyone has a camera. I’m just one of them.
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Me too, but the difference. You are a photographer. I have an iPhone6. 🙂
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Hah! Mine’s a Samsung. And sometimes I take out the Canon (and really pretend I know that I’m doing).
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You know what you’re doing. 🙂 I see the results.
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Oh… I think I often wing it 😉 But I think I do have an eye, so that helps… You are so generous.
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Yes you do. 🙂
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Merci mon ami!
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Je t’en prie.
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😊
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Looking at what we see deliberately, really taking the time to SEE it, yields great rewards! Excellent story.
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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i could relate. sometimes when i go out for a walk, i just point and shoot and am quite surprised at the results. so much beauty out there than we can realize.
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Good post and story. Most of the time, nature stages itself.
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Thank you, Lisa. 🙂
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You’re very welcome 🙂
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Some of my favourite photos have been taken in nature by using the enhancements that nature offers. Lovely.
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Thank you, Sandra.
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A lovely way to describe it 🙂
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Thank you, Bernadette.
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You see so much more with a camera in your hand. Nice one.
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Thank you, Keith.
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Much joy and beauty in the details. Sometimes there’s warning too.
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Lovely! I like the reveal of what is not seen. Nicely done
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Thank you, Laurie.
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So very true. If we don’t look, we won’t see. Nicely done 🙂
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Thank you.
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Nice one, Bill 🙂
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Thank you. 🙂
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