For Saturday’s prompt, I was to write a sonnet with the format of a song. So, not a proper sonnet. I used Edgar Allan Poe’s “Sonnet – Silence” as an inspirational guide or bridge to mine. My problem was that “The Sound of Silence” song by Paul Simon and Art Garfunkel, and the more recent version by the band, Disturbed, would not stop playing in my head.
I used a ten-syllable line structure and the ABBA, CDDC, EFFE, GG rhyme structure that Poe used, and likewise, I did not break out separate stanzas.
Let the Beat Go On
It is at a sound where a life begins
a sound there is but it we do not see.
In death, that silence there can only be.
It is in still silence where all life ends.
We awake to songs that we all can hear,
the smells, the tastes, and the good sights of life,
and thunder unheard marks the life of strife.
Then, this silence must have its place, my dear.
We live in life, until we bow to death.
The sound of silence that no one’s disturbed
the sounds of silence one has never heard,
with one last sound, upon our dying breath.
You hear the clap of echoes in my heart
it is alone we play our final part.
Look both ways because hearing loss in one ear confuses directions.
Mind the gaps and take care of all your senses.
this video was the first time I really understood and felt this song. It never ceases to move me.
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When Simon and Garfunkel sang this, it was a ‘pretty” song, and I never much liked it, or even understood. I do recalll Paul Simon standing with Art Garfunkel after one of their renditions, saying, sarcastically, “author, author…” since he wrote it and Art was apparently getting more attention…and then this guy comes along and blows the doors off it, suddenly it makes sense, all the way down…
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