
Oi, Nineteen: Lust Laughs at Love
Normally chic, now
nearly naked, she lounged in his lap
slovenly taking in
the stunning sunset,
Lamenting his languid,
lackadaisical lovemaking,
leaving his heart listlessly
lost to his long love song.
Feeling inferior
yet yearning to reggae
he cajoled and coaxed playful
music to prove she danced
not too fast for him.
Their love withstood the storm.
Look both ways in love and lust.
Mind the gaps as perfection is myth.
Be lovingly entertained.
Alliteration, when it works, it works. 🙂
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Alliteration by astute authors always works, 🙂 much like the classic clever cliché. 🙂
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