My poem challenge today was to write a poem that incorporates wild, surreal images. I was to use writing that doesn’t make formal sense, but engages all the senses and involves dream logic.
Well-known strangers speak
without talking, to us much younger
than before when it was me,
but not I; colors of unseen
monochrome images of unlimited
limitations. Chases by odorless fears
of panic unharmed—yelling out into
this empty reality of unfolding challenges
without beginnings or ways to an end.
Movement without effort, watching
as space and time pass unchallenged
by a pointlessness of futile efforts.
Yell out! Why? The dogs.
A colorless kaleidoscope of
meaningful meaningless images,
sounds unheard, spoken with
windless breaths. Fear seeing
through closed eyes, hearing with
deaf ears, brown hair on bald men,
run, kick, yell, stop, breathing.
Fight back!
Awaken,
let go. Rewind. Dream On!
Dream real.
© Bill Reynolds 4/21/2019
Is this a dream within a dream?
Look both ways for unseen meaningless threats, gapless gorges, and mindful mindlessness.
I could relate to your dream poem! Although dreams are chaotic your verse had a flow that I found easy to follow. Well done. 😊
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Thank you, Elizabeth. May your dreams be calm and flowing.
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Dream real or dream reel? Hmmmm? Really good, this one is like a visual dessert in my head.
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I was sober and smoked nothing when I wrote that (I think).
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I read it 100% sober 🙂
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