NaPoWriMo 2024, Day 21, Overstated

I don’t think I’ve ever had a real favorite color (or colour). But I needed to answer the question: what is it? So, I used to say it was blue. I like green, too.

And while I don’t like yellow cars (think lemons), pants, shirts, or journalism; Motorcycles, flowers, and mellow yellow songs all do well in Amarillo yellow. Also, I liked Jay’s pumpkin colored, semi-yellow-orange Porsche, which was kind of sweet.

Today’s Prompt-areno (it’s been three weeks, folks) is to write a poem that repeats and/or focuses on a single color. While any color would do, I went ahead with ubiquitous blue. It meets prompt.


Overstated

I thought I was cool, or at least being so,
like I would know the trick,
but I was advised
that I looked more like a fool,
the colors were a little bit sick.

My shirt, pants, and shoes were all shades of blues
but shade makes the difference, thus I donned—
a lighter shirt in a bland shade of green.
That was yesterday.

Now at home, I write a blue poem about my casuals,
while wearing a two-tone blue top
and mixed-up blue bottom that is not to be seen.

Long ago, my eyes were blue, but now some say green,
depending on the day,
my shirt,
and my blue-eyed soul.

We dance to the Blue Danube waltz,
and we swim in blue waters,
we pine for the bright blue sky,
then in August we wonder why.

Blue Ridge Mountains take me back,
a Blue Duck sits on my desk
or maybe it’s some Lonesome Dove’s
dark psychotic character.

Like red and yellow, blue is primary.
Mixing gets us shades of green or purple
or a midnight-something.

Blue nose or blue toes, blue jeans on blue teens,
blue men in a Vegas troupe.

Blue moods and Mondays
are both downers but not the blues of bennies,
and blue shaved ice is coconut flavored on blue tongues.

Navy blue is almost black, and baby blue is much too tac.
So blue is good, and blue is bad, and blue can even say
that we are in a mood or feeling sad.

But I thought it through and through
and I must admit,
if I did have a favorite color,
it would probably be something like
a deeper shade of blue.


Look both ways but try not to see red when looking at blue.
Mind the gaps in mismatched tops and bottoms, but blue is the truest of the cools
.

7 thoughts on “NaPoWriMo 2024, Day 21, Overstated

  1. Blue is definitely a passe-partout colour. Not my favourite though I cannot help but admire the sky, the water, the flower in all their shades of blue. Then again, I cannot deny I do love it, otherwise would I have painted one wall such a shade of royal blue?

    Fun stuff, Bill.

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      1. It’s ironic because during April I seldom get to write the poems I want to write. I may change that next time. But, for 2024, it is back to the prompts.

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      2. I ain’t gonna lie. I can’t wait for April to be over!!! 😉
        Some of the prompts have been interesting. Actually, I think YOU make them interesting!
        And I ain’t gonna lie… there are a few bloggers that I have pushed aside during this month. Too many daily writers! Gahhh!

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      3. I get it.
        Well, another week.
        May looks busy. We have a grandchild and two step-grands graduating from high school. Gotta go there and do the party, which is a ton of work for us. Argh!

        I have not liked the prompts so much this year; thus, I push them around a little just for fun. I even got a little political today.

        And thank YOU for being YOU. 🙂

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      4. I know you do.
        Another week indeed!
        May doesn’t look too busy. So far! There are worse things than doing the party!

        You made them interesting because you are right, I found them meh (or rather the responses of those I did read).

        Aww shucks! Stawp… 😉

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