Sammi’s Weekender #342 (ocean)

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Two Earths, land and
ocean

perfectly disguised above.

Deadly.
Needed for life.

One Ocean. Four names. Only one.
Awesome is insufficient.


Look both ways when lost at sea.
Mind the gaps in the Marianas Trench.

The third line alludes to the song, “A Horse with No Name” by America (band).

5 thoughts on “Sammi’s Weekender #342 (ocean)

  1. Bill,

    Your concise poem beautifully encapsulates the power and mystery of the ocean. The juxtaposition of its deadly nature and its essential role for life creates a captivating tension. The references to the song “A Horse with No Name” and the cautionary lines about looking both ways at sea and minding the gaps in the Marianas Trench add depth and intrigue.

    Well done in capturing the enigmatic essence of the ocean in such a succinct manner.


    David

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