Our own Wednesday morning moonbeam, Rochelle, in conjunction with Roger Bulot has set the street carnival stage for the final February Friday Fictioneers frolic with ethnic food, fun, and dancing in the street. Click on Roger’s contributed picture for a magic carpet ride over to play where growing older does not require growing up and purple is plentiful.
My mundane mindless myth meanders about the crowd in the 100 worried words below the prompt photo.

Genre: Bazaar Fiction
Title: American Men
Word Count: 100
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“There. Blue baseball cap, Ray-Bans, running shoes. Passing the Greek Jewish food. Go!”
She approached. “Hello, mark. Remember me?”
He lowered his shades and made eye contact, then noticing her cleavage, “Ah, I’m afraid I, um, ah…”
She touched his bare arm. “I’m, Chloé. Last June in Paris?”
Embarrassed, he felt blood and sense drop from his brain to his groin. He felt a nudge from behind. He turned to look. When he turned back, she was gone, as was his wallet, watch, and even his sunglasses.
He thought, I should have known at the lower-case mark. My name’s Bill.
Look both ways on crowded streets.
Mind the gaps of décolletage and keep your eye on the ball.

Oh Bill, keep your eyes up. I’m almost left feeling he deserved it!
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😎
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Mind the gap is always good advice
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A case of entrapment me thinks
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Oh Bill! You had me cackling with your last line! Great writing!
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🤣
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Very clever Bill. Hiding in plain sight!
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Baiting the poor lad. A shame.
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Very clever, both the act portrayed and the writing.
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Thanks, Iain.
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Lookers have a major advantage over just anyone when it comes to being dishonest
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Okay. It all happened so fast 💨🤪
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And his sunglasses? She’s good…I did notice the lowercase “mark” and wondered, but that last line was still great.
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Thanks, Trent. Beautiful and clever, dangerous combination 👀
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Oh my, that was clever, mark vs. Mark. I bet it happens that way all of the time.
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In so many ways, wonderful and weird.
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Thanks, Lisa.
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Oh My….a dip with décolletage and leaving you empty handed. stay abreast of the bunco, mark…I mean Bill. And very well done.
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Thank you, Doug. I shall try to keep an eye on things. 🙂
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So subtle. Loved the play on mark/Mark. 🙂
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Thank you, Sandra. 🙂
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Dear mark…I mean Bill,
And I sit wondering how he’d have known in conversation that it was a lower case mark. Although lower was the key in this…as in, raise your eyes above her cleavage. 😉 I could so see this happening in real life. You could say he paid a bill for his lowering senses. Good one…well not for Bill.
Shalom and keep looking up,
Rochelle
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Hey, Rochelle,
Thank you. Ah, the human condition.
As I was searching for new novel to read recently, I noticed how many covers are adorned by bare chested, fit male torsos. I must wonder what reader audience they are trying to attract (not really).
A bit of sexual tension can make for a good story. 🙂 Right?
Peace,
Bill (an easily distracted mark)
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Poor Bill, distracted by a flustering female and he lost his concentration. I like how you played out this deception trick, one that is executed on many unsuspecting tourists in busy cities around the world. Or perhaps this girl played the same trick on him in Paris-she is following him!
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Thanks, James. It would seem he must find his path to sequel events. 🙂
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Neat trick, neat story – I especially love the fact that he can notice a lower case in speech – even if it was too late to save his wallet!
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Thanks, Liz. A detail noticed after the fact.
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this reminds of the time my wallet was picked in a crowded lisbon shuttle bus. all it needed was some distraction and a bump. good thing my passport, credit credit cards and most cash were stored in a concealed money belt
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Yikes
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well, not good to lower your guards
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True.
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I had a feeling the lower case was there for a reason! Nice one bill!
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Thanks, Keith. 🙂
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Well then … 😉 Not to justify any sort of crime, but … yeah, keep them eyes up, eh? 😉
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Of course. 🙂
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😀
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Poor Bill – but he was such an easy mark. I hope he learns from this. Clever story. I enjoyed it.
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Thanks, Margaret. Chuffed that you liked it.
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I have a feeling I would also have become one of her “marks” 🙂
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🙂
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Ha! Well he WAS distracted
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That what I think too. 🙂
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I noticed the “mark” while I was reading. That’s the perfect situation for a pickpocket/pickface. Good one.
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Thanks.
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