Endurance swimmer, Mistress Rochelle has placed me in the city library children’s section with a limit of one hundred of my own carefully crafted words with which I must contrive a suspenseful story of escape.
Click on the photo provided by Ted Strutz to buzz on over to Rochelle’s page where “Growing older is inevitable. Growing up is optional.” I considered those options when I wrote the photo-inspired story that follows.
Genre: Micro-fiction
Title: The Latte Librarian
Word count: 100
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Passing through the library’s deserted children’s section, I turned toward the noisy coffee shop.
I set my chai latte and backpack on the counter nearest the women’s table, drank half the latte, then slipped the smoke bomb into the cup. From the men’s room, I called in the bomb threat.
When evacuation was announced, I set off the smoke bomb.
I returned to transfer valuables from each handbag or backpack into mine, then left through the side door just as fire trucks and police cars arrived. I removed the disguise in the car, kissed my partner, and we drove off.
Look both ways to be aware of surroundings.
Notice people and their trappings.
Mind the gaps of their absence.
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What a brilliant thief! Of course, I like to think I would not leave my handbag behind.
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That is why the smoke bomb was required, to cause them to panic and run.
Thank you, Dale. 🙂
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Oh, I understood that part. I’m just saying I like to think I’d have the presence of mind to not forget mine… of course, that doesn’t mean I would 😉
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Of course, who would ever forget such an important item? 🙂
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Well… yanno… 😉
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🙂 “Wait. We need to back. I forgot my ….”
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Hahaha!
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A bomb threat then a bomb goes off not two meters away. Hauling ass unencumbered would be understandable. 🙂
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True ’nuff, now that you put it that way 🙂
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Anyway. The plot is feasible and timing is critical.
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Yes. It was a fabulous FF!
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Thank you, Dale. I noticed you posted very early. A charming piece it was.
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🙂
Some days be like that! It was a lovely memory. Feels like eons ago.
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Good, and vicious here this week. Rule #1: when evacuating, ALWAYS grab your purse/bag/valuables….
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Should be. 🙂
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Clever idea.
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Unfortunately some of the most dastardly characters have such smarts
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🙂
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Great idea, I might try it myself!
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Your story prompts me to wonder why on earth people turn to crime. If the perp had put in an equal amount of thought ingenuity and work into regular work, he’d probably have made much more money – and without the possibility of gaol time! Good story – and brave man writing a story of crime in a children’s library!
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Well where’s the fun in that? 😇
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And hopefully the place did not have cameras. 😁 Good story!
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Thus the disguise and smoke 😁
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Very neat pen portrait of a criminal totally detached from humanity. There’s worse to come from him, I reckon. The casual kiss at the end was great.
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Glad you liked it, Jilly.
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A criminal ruse that makes me wonder if the proceeds were worth the effort. I suspect in this case it was the thrill and the drama he enjoyed, plus his girlfriend needed some new jewellery. Great story in any case.
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Thank you, James. High risk, low gain. I will speak to him about that.
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Dear Bill,
Cagy thief that. A good reminder to never leave the purse behind. Fun story. I thought perhaps he was going to pick up a children’s book and enjoy. I was wrong. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Hey, Rochelle,
The scene in my mind was my local library. After all the comments, I want to make changes. 🙂
Yes, purses, pockets, backpacks, or briefcases; all targets for the wandering thief. 🙂
Peace,
Bill
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A clever but dastardly plot.
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no bad deed goes unpunished. karma awaits. 🙂
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Oh dear. I am so screwed. 🙂
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A hit and run on the inside. haha I think my safety world be more impotant then my purse; then again, I always sling mine across my body. It would be hanging and dragging me down but it would be with me. You’ve created quite a dialog with this thievery tale, Bill.
Have a wonderful weekend …
Isadora 😎
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And I really did also believe the bit about clicking the badge (had to be the badge!) – until I tried other body parts too!
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I’m so busted. 🙂
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I’m so glad the children’s library was deserted. I’d hate to think of little kids being caught up in this and traumatised for life. Fun story.
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Oh, just think of all the stories they could tell their friends. “Guess what happened at the library yesterday?” 🙂
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A clever crim. Sounds like he has made off with the loot!
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That was a great action scene. Could be made into a crime comedy. Do rich people with lots of money in their bags even visit libraries?
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Cuz COVID I no longer linger in my local library, but that is the source and map of my ploy, including the ladies (young and old) meeting and chatting around a large table. 🙂
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Well done dastardly deed indeed. Flash Fiction is fun even setting aside that no one can define it.
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Thanks again. 🙂
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foolish of them to leave their handbags, but we panic quickly
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Yes we do.
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Get lost in the chaos. Good plan.
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:::jotting down notes::: You never know, my Christmas Club fund could get depleted sometime and need replenishing…
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Right, Lisa. Ya never know.
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Superb story-writing. You had me on the edge of my easy chair 🙂
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Don’t fall. Thank you.
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Oh man, that was an awesome movie. I hope this person gets caught and goes to jail for a very long time. Because, that is not cool! That said, fun narrator to glare at means a fun story to read!
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Yes. The movie is a hoot. 🙂
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Clever thief! Good story. I wondered what the “women’s table” was; I’ve never seen one in a coffee shop, but I’ve seen the “women’s room”.
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