A forty-four word poem (plus title) written for dverse prompt of stream.
Pluvial Passion
Let me feel your kiss.
May your wet tongue lick.
Run into my eyes, down my face,
under my clothes,
over my body.
My passion, you pour copious streams
of love upon me.
Touch me where you can.
Where are you, my sweet Rain?
Look both ways for summer showers.
Mind the gaps between the drops.
Wow! This is such a sensual ode to rain. Well done.
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Thank you.
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Wow is right! Very provocative verse that pulls you right in! Bravo…please let it rain!!
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Thank you, Sue.
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Wow, Bill. That’s some sexy rain!
❤
David
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Thank, David. It’s all about how we feel, right?
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absolutely!
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Hot rain…
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In a way, yes.
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Let it rain! Great quadrille, with the sensuous bent.
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Thank you.
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Let it rain, indeed, especially when it feels like this poem.
Wonderful.
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Thank you, Ali.
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I bet you love showers! 😉 appreciate the passion poured into this!
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I am a pluviophile. I like cloudy rainy days. 🙂 (a lot)
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Rainy days often inspire me to write. Maybe it’s a frequency thing! 🌧
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Oh, my! Sultry rain. Lovely.
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🙂
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Excellent poem, Bill. I should have looked at the title a little closer as I was getting carried away in another direction. I feel the same way about rain and am really longing for it (along with every other life form in the area!)
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome.
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Drenched from this read. Fun, flirty and splash-worthy.
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Thank you, K. (I think 🙂
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Lovely sensuality…with a perfect twist.
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I like the way you have woven eroticism into a poem of rain!
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Thank you, Ingrid.
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Very sensory! I am also a pluviophile so this “stream” very much spoke to me 🙂
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Sensuous ode to rain, Mr. Pluviolover…
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